Not entirely certain where this one was going although I do have a few of the later bits in my head. Mostly I just had this scene so any opinions would be welcomed. :)

The Consequence of Loyalty

Illya walked out of the restaurant and immediately spotted the black sedan idling on the other side of the street, its tinted windows giving nothing away ( Read more... )

I've had this for over a year-it's the seed of of something I want to expand but I'm stuck. Ideas for expansion and feedback would be appreciated ( Read more... )

If you don't know what that is then here's a brief explanation ( Read more... )

And because you thought the drabble needed a little more (consider it a birthday treat ;)
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Friday is the day we can post stories that are being expanded, whether in the embryo stage or farther along. If you'd like input or simple agreement that you're on the right track, please feel free to share.

So this one came out of a drabble from weeks back, and partly out of a failed attempt at writing for the previous What's My Line ("You're late. Again.") and basically, I think the problem is I started writing it and then started wondering whether instead of going forwards from the drabble I should have been going backwards. It's not finished, but I ( Read more... )

Okay, I'll go first.  And I'm not even sure this is the format to follow because we've not done it before.  I'd say that posting our unfinished stories as they currently exist is one way, and I'll do that here with this one that I've had taking up space for some time.  It has neighbors, I must confess, several more that need finishing along with ( Read more... )

In a comment from otherhawk she mentioned her file of stories that needed to be 'expanded', and the idea struck me that all of us probably have a few in our own file cabinet that are works in progress, and in need of completion ( Read more... )